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Monday, 21 July 2008

Home Page Copy Revision

Getting the homepage of your website right is everything. Let's look at the copy on Bush Marketing's home page.

welcome to bbm

Bush has been based in Byron Bay since 2001. People on our team also hang out in Sydney, Toronto, Vancouver and Melbourne.

If your business or organisation is looking for fresh ideas and results contact Gregory Cromwell to arrange a complementary business development consulting session. We specialise in web design and development and know how to optimise and market your brand on the web.

Revised Copy (note making it up on the fly from the shed-strategy. less is more)

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Bush Branding & Marketing was founded by Gregory Cromwell to provide consulting services for growing businesses. Nighean, Jason, Rachael, Andrew have completed over 1500 projects: primarily design driven, web work with loose briefs and tight budgets.

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This could be the strategic breakthrough I have been trying to self medicate with. Point is that if you are not happy with what your homepage says to people then change it. See what happens. I will keep you posted on what happens to our business once Kaleigh te copy editor/writer and the rest of our team has their say.

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